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First Light

across jade dew grass... quick barefoot numbing stumbles - warm lips bid heart thaw ~~~~~~~~~~~ first light

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/31/2024 7:04:00 AM

very nice..and since heart is one of your fave words here's two for ya <3 <3

Arlo Parker
Date: 12/31/2024 9:11:00 AM

Heart is the seminal organ a poet must explore. Someone I know has this element on a sleeve. Bless Bless.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/29/2024 7:13:00 PM

Wow! You captured the entire physical/sensing response! A fave for that…. Superb penned perception’ sharing

Arlo Parker
Date: 12/30/2024 9:28:00 AM

Much appreciate you "fave", SE. Take good care. =o]