David Mohn Poet Cinquain

First Kiss - Visual 4

This night-
                      Will always shine,
               Far grander than the sheen, 
   Charmed from the street by your green eyes... 
                            My love.

 An American Beauty: Write Like Adelaide Contest
                           11 Jan 2015

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Skat A February 1, 2015 at 2:22 PM DAVID, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 28, 2015 at 7:53 AM Congrats on your win, David! I love your romantic take on the picture...hugs, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2015 at 4:22 PM cute love poem. Congrats in my contest.

Richard Lamoureux January 25, 2015 at 3:41 PM Nicely done David, congrats!

Maurice Yvonne January 14, 2015 at 5:33 PM Just stunning David what a thrill to read!

Jan Allison January 12, 2015 at 11:42 AM Such wonderful romantic imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus January 12, 2015 at 10:30 AM I agree with Dave...this is very beautiful and romantic. I already see it as a winner. #7 // paul Paul Callus January 26, 2015 at 11:18 AM Congratulation on your fine win, David, although I am disappointed at not seeing it place higher! // paul