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First Kiss

Our first kiss Felt like a magic spell As my lips kept touching his I didn't realize I had already fell Through all the years I obeyed his splendor And with all the tears He was just a pretender It was time to wake up Before it was too late I had to break up What could have been blind fate

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Date: 3/11/2016 6:02:00 PM
I like this little rhyming poem, Carrie. Too bad he turned out to be a loser. His loss! Peace my friend:)
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Carrie White
Date: 3/11/2016 7:04:00 PM
Thank you :)

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