First Kiss

Our first kiss
Felt like a magic spell
As my lips kept touching his
I didn't realize I had already fell
Through all the years
I obeyed his splendor
And with all the tears
He was just a pretender
It was time to wake up
Before it was too late
I had to break up
What could have been blind fate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 11, 2016 at 6:02 PM
I like this little rhyming poem, Carrie. Too bad he turned out to be a loser. His loss! Peace my friend:)
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March 11, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Thank you :)
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