First Kiss

tree leaves turning red
the same color as your face
the first time we kissed

for herkissloveoctoberhaiku

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Roger Turner

May 12, 2018 at 2:50 PM

short and sweet. love this.

Paul Callus

May 3, 2015 at 9:36 AM

Lovely memory brought on by the red leaves. Your first kiss and introductory offering on Soup are impressive. // paul

MD Johnson

May 4, 2015 at 10:56 AM

Thank you for the very nice compliment. I appreciate your visits.

Anastasia Denny

April 11, 2015 at 10:47 PM

Reminds me of my first kiss full of magic and it was amazing how bad I blushed

MD Johnson

April 17, 2015 at 11:23 AM

Yes...nice memories to have. Thank you for reading.

Skat A

April 4, 2015 at 8:10 PM

MICHAEL, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

MD Johnson

April 4, 2015 at 11:47 PM

Thank you for the nice welcome to Poetry Soup.

Kp Nunez

March 30, 2015 at 5:59 PM

First kiss in Autumn...lovely memories about your loved one's face, too. Nice jux on your haiku. Welcome to PoetrySoup, Michael. Kim :)

Poet Destroyer A

March 29, 2015 at 11:55 AM

you are welcome

Anastasia Denny

March 29, 2015 at 9:35 AM

I love this, it reminds me of my first kiss

MD Johnson

March 30, 2015 at 10:34 AM

I'm happy you enjoy it. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 29, 2015 at 9:34 AM

- A small greeting and warm welcome, Michael D.:) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)

MD Johnson

March 30, 2015 at 10:33 AM

Thank you for the greeting and welcome.

Poet Destroyer A

March 27, 2015 at 11:07 PM

about the haiku. I think it's very sweet to remember everything about your first kiss. Love the imagery and comparison. Love LINDA

MD Johnson

March 28, 2015 at 9:26 AM

Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

March 27, 2015 at 11:05 PM

Michael, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

MD Johnson

March 28, 2015 at 9:22 AM

Thank you for the welcome. Yes, I welcome constructive feedback. I know that I am not very skilled but I do enjoy this beautiful form of expression.

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