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first haircuts

the barber's scissors: my breath lost as the last of his baby curls fell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/22/2010 9:35:00 AM
This is really sweet, Tara! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:34:00 PM
awwwwwww had to happen sometime? I guess? fret...did he cry? Light & love
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Breathtaking Love" Tara. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:38:00 PM
Congrats Tara on your HM in the B.L. contest with this sweet Haiku .. having four sons have experience your lines each time.. great write .. great honor ..enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/16/2010 10:59:00 AM
really sweet and a heartfelt image!
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:34:00 AM
A nice observation with a deep thought
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Date: 5/16/2010 2:44:00 AM
AH! I am with you there. to see the baby turn into a little boy, mixed feelings...well done Tara...cheers Margaret
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