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First Haiku Attempt

Brown earth moist Trees dressed up all bright Lovely rains in sight

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Date: 9/19/2016 8:38:00 AM
a lovely first attempt with great imagery:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/29/2016 10:06:00 AM
This is a great first attempt, Vivek. In fact, I like it so much, I will base my next haiku attempt on the elements of your haiku. Let's see your next attempt! Cheers, David
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