First Haiku Attempt

Brown earth moist
                    Trees dressed up all bright
                    Lovely rains in sight
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Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 8:38 AM
a lovely first attempt with great imagery:-) hugs jan xx
De La Croes Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 10:06 AM
This is a great first attempt, Vivek. In fact, I like it so much, I will base my next haiku attempt on the elements of your haiku. Let's see your next attempt! Cheers, David
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