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First Glance

I remember the day and the hour First seeing you in your tower For you were out of my reach Vertical walls to breach You were worth the climb One glance sublime Rapunzel Heart swell Spell

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/13/2014 5:11:00 PM

oh I like it! :) well done Theresa :)

Theresa Stephens
Date: 7/17/2014 3:55:00 PM

Hi Casarah, So pleased you liked it and for your welcome support, Thank you. Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2014 9:42:00 PM

;this is really neat, I like how it rhymed going down!!

Theresa Stephens
Date: 7/17/2014 3:57:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thank you for taking the time to read and make contact with your very kind supportive comments. Regards Theresa xx