First Glance

I remember the day and the hour
First seeing you in your tower

For you were out of my reach
Vertical walls to breach

You were worth the climb
One glance sublime

Rapunzel
Heart swell

Spell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 5:11 PM
oh I like it! :) well done Theresa :)
Stephens Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Hi Casarah, So pleased you liked it and for your welcome support, Thank you. Theresa xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 9:42 PM
;this is really neat, I like how it rhymed going down!!
Stephens Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 3:57 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you for taking the time to read and make contact with your very kind supportive comments. Regards Theresa xx
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