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had me at hello
nowhere else for me to go
the rest was for show
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:41 PM
A delightfully charming poem, Greg. Beautiful.
Gaul Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 5:53 AM
I feel your gentle, poetic guiding hand trying to lift me up. It's an unclear path ahead but undaunted and humbled by your support, I'm forging on. You see what I'm doing don't you? Thank you so much. Your advice would be welcome.
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