Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

First Friends

Magical memories etched into time
looking at life through innocent eyes
laughter and giggles are reminders to us
to cherish the moments, sit back there's no rush

Incredible journey's are about to take place
soon they'll be off bringing tears to this face
First friendships are molded from what young ones see
God's little soldiers are about to be set free

Teach them good values, kindness and trust
love and humility of course, respect is a must
show them with actions let feelings shine through
and never forget to say I love you

The roses are blooming, there are geese in the lake
Invite them to nature and special memories make

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Arthur Vaso October 13, 2016 at 10:11 PM That is so sweet and cute, if only they just stayed that age! Great write!

Daniel Turner October 13, 2016 at 3:54 PM Well Tim, this one is really special. It brings back so many memories for one thing. I remember when I was young, I just couldn't wait to get older. Little did I know, little did I know. Tim Smith October 13, 2016 at 4:05 PM Thanks DT. I wish life would slow down.

Nette Onclaud October 13, 2016 at 2:05 PM this is the time when children begin to share themselves with people outside of the family... such a sweet message you bring, tim.. huggs Tim Smith October 13, 2016 at 2:29 PM Yes nette, that is my youngest on the left

Charmaine Chircop October 13, 2016 at 1:54 PM How beautiful this is Tim..Indeed children follow our example...and indeed nature and God values should be cherished by us..so They will be by th em too.A fave. Tim Smith October 13, 2016 at 2:28 PM It's nice seeing her being independent and so sweet to her friends but I don't want her growing up too quick. I'm sure you already see.

Michelle Mac Donald October 13, 2016 at 1:35 PM Affectionate and endearing, Tim! This is a poem they can always have the opportunity to enjoy and cherish; it's a heartfelt love time capsule. Best wishes to you and yours! Mikki Tim Smith October 13, 2016 at 2:26 PM Thank you Mikki

Anne-Lise Andresen October 13, 2016 at 1:23 PM - Good and wise words on their way in life, Tim - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith October 13, 2016 at 2:25 PM Thanks A-L

Jan Allison October 13, 2016 at 12:57 PM Such wise words indeed Tim and the picture is adorable - you are an amazing father and a great role model to so many youngsters with all the coaching work you do:-) hugs jan xx7 fave Tim Smith October 13, 2016 at 1:04 PM Thanks Jan. That is my youngest and a neighbor this past Monday.

Heidi Sands October 13, 2016 at 12:48 PM Love it! Great poem! Tim Smith October 13, 2016 at 12:53 PM Thank you Heidi