First Flush of Youth

dewdrops glisten as
         maiden tears on virgin leaves
                    soaked with betrayal


Date June3 2017
Contest sponsored by Rick Parise 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 5:10 PM
Sad little poem! Congrats!
Singh Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Thanks for your ever prompt warm words!
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