First Flakes

snowflakes whisper down
covering the once green ground
white carpet for prints
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 4:23 PM
absolutely delightful Regina:-) Hugs jan x
Meade Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 9:35 AM
There is magic in the first snow and in your soft words . . . I got a warm feeling from your haiku.
Nance Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 8:07 AM
Enjoyed your haiku :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 6:51 AM
Very creative..Uniquely yours..I can just see the dog and cat prints in the snow..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I enjoyed writing that one..It was a wanting to go out on the porch in the morning moment but the cold front had come through..Have a blessed day..Sara
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