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First Day

First Day Everyone is ready for the first day For the first moment Everyone is happy and gay Some are nervous and shy Some also sit down and cry Its never the first day As you are born every day You see life the way you want to You are the creator You are the Leonardo So trust yourself and Move On Just believe in yourself And Carry On ----------------------------------- You can find my poem First Day in my book of Poems --- http://www.amazon.com/Labyrinth-Mustafah-Mun/dp/1409285251/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1252381235&sr=1-1

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Date: 9/12/2009 9:36:00 AM
Interesting view. Nice use of rhyme. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. I read your comment on my blog--thanks for the response. Good luck with your book. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/12/2009 9:21:00 AM
Hey Mustapha, great rhyming scheme and interesting flow of words, this is a creative poem, I love your style of writing, please keep writing, hope to read more of your wonderful poems, welcome to poetrysoup. You will have fun and learn from great writers. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 9/12/2009 5:30:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Mustafa. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors.I hope you will be joining us as a premium member here at the site. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2009 4:00:00 AM
Yes there is a first day for everything. Sara
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