First Day

First Day

Everyone is ready for the first day
For the first moment
Everyone is happy and gay

Some are nervous and shy
Some also sit down and cry

Its never the first day
As you are born every day

You see life the way you want to
You are the creator You are the Leonardo

So trust yourself and Move On
Just believe in yourself
And Carry On


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You can find my poem First Day in my book of Poems ---
http://www.amazon.com/Labyrinth-Mustafah-Mun/dp/1409285251/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1252381235&sr=1-1
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September 12, 2009 at 9:36 AM
Interesting view. Nice use of rhyme. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. I read your comment on my blog--thanks for the response. Good luck with your book. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 12, 2009 at 9:21 AM
Hey Mustapha, great rhyming scheme and interesting flow of words, this is a creative poem, I love your style of writing, please keep writing, hope to read more of your wonderful poems, welcome to poetrysoup. You will have fun and learn from great writers. Love, Adeleke
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September 12, 2009 at 5:30 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Mustafa. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors.I hope you will be joining us as a premium member here at the site. Love, Carol
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September 12, 2009 at 4:00 AM
Yes there is a first day for everything. Sara
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