Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs Poet Rhyme

First Date

Our first date didn't turn out so great
You were so close to me that I couldn't concentrate
I told you that I didn't want to be out to late
So you took me to McDonalds for cheap dinner date

You had the nerve to call the next day
And ask me if everything was fine
When you took me out for a burger and soda
Instead of a nice steak and a glass of wine

I couldn't help but lash out at you because you ruined my night
Then  actually thought when you got home that everything was alright
So please lose my number and stay out of my sight
Because If I ever see you again we just might have to fight

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Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2016 at 12:23 AM Gwen, Congratulations on your awesome, somewhat angry win. Love LINDA Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 21, 2016 at 10:20 PM Thanks

Vladislav Raven March 16, 2016 at 9:44 AM Hi Gwen, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad. Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 17, 2016 at 7:43 PM Thank you much Vlad

Skat A March 14, 2016 at 11:06 AM gwen, congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting this Angry Topic. Have a nice day **SKAT** Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 17, 2016 at 7:44 PM Thanks SKAT, appreciate you.

Poet Destroyer A September 2, 2014 at 9:29 AM you are welcome

Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2014 at 2:05 AM Gwen... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs August 31, 2014 at 10:25 PM Thanks

V P Mahur March 17, 2014 at 2:30 AM Dear Gibbs, This often happens in love when we are unable to understand the feelings of others. Nice poem. Thanks! Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs August 31, 2014 at 10:25 PM Thanks

Jan Allison March 8, 2014 at 4:01 PM Oh what a let down - I hope he paid! Hope the next experience is a lot better and you get treated as you deserve. Jan xxx Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 12, 2014 at 6:00 PM Thanks, but it's just a poem not my real first date