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First Date

Our first date didn't turn out so great You were so close to me that I couldn't concentrate I told you that I didn't want to be out to late So you took me to McDonalds for cheap dinner date You had the nerve to call the next day And ask me if everything was fine When you took me out for a burger and soda Instead of a nice steak and a glass of wine I couldn't help but lash out at you because you ruined my night Then actually thought when you got home that everything was alright So please lose my number and stay out of my sight Because If I ever see you again we just might have to fight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/20/2016 12:23:00 AM
Gwen, Congratulations on your awesome, somewhat angry win. Love LINDA
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 3/21/2016 10:20:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/16/2016 9:44:00 AM
Hi Gwen, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 3/17/2016 7:43:00 PM
Thank you much Vlad
Date: 3/14/2016 11:06:00 AM
gwen, congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting this Angry Topic. Have a nice day **SKAT**
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 3/17/2016 7:44:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, appreciate you.
Date: 9/2/2014 9:29:00 AM
you are welcome
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Date: 4/27/2014 2:05:00 AM
Gwen... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 8/31/2014 10:25:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/17/2014 2:30:00 AM
Dear Gibbs, This often happens in love when we are unable to understand the feelings of others. Nice poem. Thanks!
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 8/31/2014 10:25:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/8/2014 4:01:00 PM
Oh what a let down - I hope he paid! Hope the next experience is a lot better and you get treated as you deserve. Jan xxx
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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 3/12/2014 6:00:00 PM
Thanks, but it's just a poem not my real first date

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