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Image from internet..If one clicks on it with right side of mouse, there will be something that says image properties click that and that will show where it came from on the internet..This work is still about my vacation..Sara

First Dark Charcoal Sky

first dark charcoal sky sun starts kissing horizon.... public love affair
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May 13, 2012 at 10:26 PM
Sara, Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD
Goff Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 9:04 AM
Yes....Linda is right! Sara! last line brings awesome images! jimbo
Sweetheart Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:33 PM
awesome imagery Sara.. luv that last line.. stupendous piece.. I may be away a day or two.. personal health issues again with hand .. hankxx for asking and for prayers .. always appreciatd..luv..
K. Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 12:07 PM
I really like this one, Sara-- I like the image of what your first line evokes, then the contrast of your 2nd line-- very striking :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 6:32 AM
a pure rush of a 'ku, sara... one of your best; lovely last line!...:) huggs!
Situation Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 4:09 PM
i get it. it's haiku
Mohammed Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 1:43 PM
It's quite interesting...It sounds like food for thought! I like it..-Diana
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April 13, 2012 at 1:10 PM
What an incredible write this one is my friend! This Haiku is very descriptive, and very nicely done! I love the line, "first dark charcoal sky" it says so much, my imagination sees this sky as extremely black in a way...just then the sun comes! Ah simply beautiful! Great Work!!
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April 13, 2012 at 12:27 PM
A magnificent description of sunrise, Sara. Like the twist at the end. Quite witty thinking of this as a "public love affair," but it's a very creative analogy. So glad you had fun on your vacation. Wish you could join me on mine. Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:47 AM
lovely write indeed, sara
Collins Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Sara - This is a beauty. Kathy
Kendrick Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Elliott, Glad that you enjoyed reading my work..Sara
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Very moving.i love it.
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