First Cold Snap

season’s first cold snap bringing in the outdoor plants killing frost tonight written November 4, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/9/2021 7:48:00 AM

Succinct and wonderfully penned

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/9/2021 9:08:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. I suppose it is coming whether we like it or not. It can brutal where you live. I remember St. Louis winters when I lived there.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/4/2021 2:04:00 PM

Oh, yes it is cold..... it is like being slap ... one day it's humid and hot then the brrrrrr cold to the bone. Great imagery

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/4/2021 2:05:00 PM

Oh, I suppose I can live with it!

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/4/2021 1:54:00 PM

Bundle up, Buttercup.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/4/2021 2:05:00 PM

I can't get on enough heavy clothes, Jenna.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/4/2021 1:27:00 PM

I can feel the chill in your haiku Milton. Frost and plants certainly don't mix well. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/4/2021 2:06:00 PM

Indeed, they don't. To be on the safeside I brought in my plants a week ago.