First Blooms

Ruby, canary, white, and purple heads waking tulips in my yard. Yawn and stretch petals to salute the sun, smiling full blossomed beauties.
Written: 3-2-19 For: "Spring Haiku Poetry Contest" Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Bocsa Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 8:09 AM
The first blooms fills our heart of tenderness each time when springs come:first in the human soul. It is a joy to follow your imagery.
Kiser Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 12:56 AM
I am glad, thanks so much.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Hello M.L.Kiser, a lovely poem for spring. Have a nice evening my friend.
Kiser Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Thanks Darlene, you have a great evening too.
Romios Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 9:34 PM
Great news..great poem Panagiota
Kiser Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Thanks Panagiota.
B. Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 7:34 AM
A belated congratulations on your win, M.L.. A beautiful haiku!! Imagery is amazing.. This is a gem, a fave for me.. Have a blessed day, my friend..
Kiser Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Thank you, Robertina; I am glad you enjoyed it.
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 5:05 PM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Kiser Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Thanks so much, Sara.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Terrifically done; I can see them and their beautiful colorful heads!
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:28 AM
Then, the poem did its job. Thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 2:41 PM
beautiful imagery , especially that second one. Congrats.
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thanks so much.
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:31 PM
this was one of my faves ML!:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thanks.
Lindley Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Great imagery, depth , and full of Nature's wonders! A fav.. a gem too..
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thanks so much, Robert.
Messina Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Great imagery, ML. Congratulations on your win. :)
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Many thanks.
Y. Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-)Alexis
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thanks Alexis.
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:18 AM
Back with more congrats, ML.
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thank you.
Sands Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations for your win :)
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thanks.
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 6:31 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Thanks again.
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 5:46 AM
A beautiful haiku with lovely imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Many thanks.
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Ahh!! Very descriptive and colorful work. It will really be spring when they bloom. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Your welcome and thank you.
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 11:34 AM
amazing imagery ML a joy to read:-) hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 12:42 PM
Oh thank you.
Pandit Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 11:18 AM
Colorful..beautiful..lively..just like spring.
Kiser Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 12:42 PM
Thanks, Vijay. I'm dying for spring.
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 10:29 AM
Lovely, ML. Beautiful tribute to spring.
Kiser Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 12:42 PM
Thanks so much.
Cunningham Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 10:11 AM
A beautiful image M.L., good luck. Tom.
Kiser Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 12:42 PM
Thanks Tom.
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