First Birthday

Happy birthday to a tot on her one-eth
Most times its best to not know what cometh.
But it has been said by prophets, forsooth:
Surely you'll have more teeth on your twoth
Oh glory to vittles masticatable
You'll be glad to eschew the unchewable.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 3:24 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Eastman Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 10:43 AM
LOL... Very enjoyable. Congrats on the win!
A   Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 8:13 PM
Gary, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 4:34 PM
this one is unique!! I enjoyed the read and congrats for your win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 12:55 PM
Hi and congratulations on your win Gary xx
Squyres Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 12:48 PM
I'd have chosen Rhyme as the form...for it had rhyme throughout. Enjoyed reading this cute NR. Thank you for entering my contest and Congrats on the win !!!
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