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First Birthday

Happy birthday to a tot on her one-eth Most times its best to not know what cometh. But it has been said by prophets, forsooth: Surely you'll have more teeth on your twoth Oh glory to vittles masticatable You'll be glad to eschew the unchewable.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2013 3:24:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/30/2013 10:43:00 AM

LOL... Very enjoyable. Congrats on the win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2013 8:13:00 PM

Gary, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2013 4:34:00 PM

this one is unique!! I enjoyed the read and congrats for your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/29/2013 12:55:00 PM

Hi and congratulations on your win Gary xx

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/29/2013 12:48:00 PM

I'd have chosen Rhyme as the form...for it had rhyme throughout. Enjoyed reading this cute NR. Thank you for entering my contest and Congrats on the win !!!