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First Baby

First baby arrived in nineteen ninety-nine.



First Baby, holy Son, Saviour of the world this Christmas.

(two separate monoku)

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Richard Pickett

December 11, 2009 at 7:24 AM

Love the topic and flow...Good Job Doris...Taz

Nicole Sharon Brown

December 6, 2009 at 5:29 PM

So much said in one line awesome, simply beautiful.

Sara Kendrick

December 5, 2009 at 1:10 AM

Interesting thoughts here my daughter. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Mom

Jared Pickett

December 4, 2009 at 11:54 PM

Have no seeds of my own(or that I know about)HEHE........ But, I was an only child until the age of twelve... Now, I have five siblings in which I helped care for.... I know it is not the same as being a parent.... I was raised well, I give my parents all the credit for the patience I have... I want to spread my seed, but I don't want the wrong baby's mom.... Seen to many friends/family struggle.... Awesome write here... Your little man is the "Holy Son", the next President.....:JP]