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First Baby

First baby arrived in nineteen ninety-nine.

First Baby, holy Son, Saviour of the world this Christmas.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 12/11/2009 7:24:00 AM
Love the topic and flow...Good Job Doris...Taz
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Date: 12/6/2009 5:29:00 PM
So much said in one line awesome, simply beautiful.
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Date: 12/5/2009 1:10:00 AM
Interesting thoughts here my daughter. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Mom
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Date: 12/4/2009 11:54:00 PM
Have no seeds of my own(or that I know about)HEHE........ But, I was an only child until the age of twelve... Now, I have five siblings in which I helped care for.... I know it is not the same as being a parent.... I was raised well, I give my parents all the credit for the patience I have... I want to spread my seed, but I don't want the wrong baby's mom.... Seen to many friends/family struggle.... Awesome write here... Your little man is the "Holy Son", the next President.....:JP]
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Date: 12/4/2009 7:40:00 PM
babies are so precious great topic keep writing
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