First Affection Sparkle

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In the depths of my heart, I felt romance. A passion that burned with full-throttle force, And in your eyes, I found a kindred spirit. Someone who understood my every limit We sang a song that echoed through the earth. a melody that spoke of love and desire, Our hearts are entwined as aesthetic mirth. A symphony that set our souls turn to fire. We walked hand in hand through fields of green, Our laughter is a sweet melody in the air. The world around us seemed to glean And at that moment, it was just us there. With each passing day, our love grew stronger. A bond that nothing could ever sever, And as we stood beneath the starry sky, longer We knew that our love would last forever. So here we are—both hearts that beat as one. Living our lives in errorless harmony, And as we faced the future together, we won. We agnize that our love will always be.

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Date: 6/11/2023 2:18:00 PM
You are blessed my friend to have met someone very special: With each passing day, our love grew stronger. A bond that nothing could ever sever... not many are as fortunate. Your poem aptly celebrates love.
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