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Firmly In Her Grasp

Firmly in her Grasp Captivated by this beauty, my heart held firmly in her grasp. Sweet, just like a mango smoothie! Captivated by this beauty Superstar, I am her groupie and I feel up to the task. Captivated by this beauty, my heart held firmly in her grasp. ABaAabAB Triolet Jared Pickett 9/11/14 Asavvy1

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/19/2023 3:50:00 AM

This is very well done Jarred, I was captivated by your skill and poetic beauty ,

Jared Pickett
Date: 2/19/2023 3:55:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words and reading some of my work. I will visit your archive and indulge as well. Much love Asavvy1

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/21/2023 6:55:00 AM

Delightfully romantic. Much enjoyed.

Jared Pickett
Date: 1/21/2023 7:12:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Much love

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/14/2023 6:46:00 PM

" Sweet, just like a mango smoothie! " My heart is smiling. :) There's something magical about these words, and I would stay firmly in your grasp. Just sayin'. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy

Jared Pickett
Date: 1/14/2023 6:55:00 PM

If you liked this one I'd recommend you try some of my others. Quarter Among Dimes, Coitus, Her Blue Dress. Just to name a few. I'll be visiting your page to read your work. Thank you for reading. Much love!!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/4/2021 8:28:00 PM

Why you have stopped writing poetry dear friend. I would revisit on your page some other day to see a response from you and pray that you are find and OK. With best wishes for the New Year 2021. Your comment on my Pratradoot series of 2010 forced me to take your well being df.....wbw ...........Ravindra K Kapoor

Jared Pickett
Date: 1/15/2023 1:23:00 AM

I'll be back with a vengeance, don't you worry. Life has been busy, wife and two daughters have kept me occupied. Yet, through it all i have much to wrote about. I am blessed to have a community that cares about my well being just to check on me. Keep in touch, I'll have something soon brother!! Much love

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/25/2015 8:35:00 PM

Such a lucky woman should not ignore you Jared. I have enjoyed this poem! Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 9/11/2014 9:57:00 AM

stunning write Jared i have yet to try this form I love the repeated lines and the thought of her being like a mango smoothie mmm - great write:-) Hugs Jan xx

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 9/11/2014 9:26:00 AM

Nice play with rhymes