Jared Pickett Poet Triolet

Firmly In Her Grasp

Firmly in her Grasp


Captivated by this beauty,
my heart held firmly in her grasp.
Sweet, just like a mango smoothie!
Captivated by this beauty
Superstar, I am her groupie
and I feel up to the task.
Captivated by this beauty,
my heart held firmly in her grasp.



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Jared Pickett
9/11/14
Asavvy1

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Mystic Rose Rose February 19, 2023 at 3:50 AM This is very well done Jarred, I was captivated by your skill and poetic beauty , Jared Pickett February 19, 2023 at 3:55 AM Thank you for your kind words and reading some of my work. I will visit your archive and indulge as well. Much love Asavvy1

Vijay Pandit January 21, 2023 at 6:55 AM Delightfully romantic. Much enjoyed. Jared Pickett January 21, 2023 at 7:12 AM Thank you my friend. Much love

Brandy Nicole January 14, 2023 at 6:46 PM " Sweet, just like a mango smoothie! " My heart is smiling. :) There's something magical about these words, and I would stay firmly in your grasp. Just sayin'. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy Jared Pickett January 14, 2023 at 6:55 PM If you liked this one I'd recommend you try some of my others. Quarter Among Dimes, Coitus, Her Blue Dress. Just to name a few. I'll be visiting your page to read your work. Thank you for reading. Much love!!

Ravindra K Kapoor January 4, 2021 at 8:28 PM Why you have stopped writing poetry dear friend. I would revisit on your page some other day to see a response from you and pray that you are find and OK. With best wishes for the New Year 2021. Your comment on my Pratradoot series of 2010 forced me to take your well being df.....wbw ...........Ravindra K Kapoor Jared Pickett January 15, 2023 at 1:23 AM I'll be back with a vengeance, don't you worry. Life has been busy, wife and two daughters have kept me occupied. Yet, through it all i have much to wrote about. I am blessed to have a community that cares about my well being just to check on me. Keep in touch, I'll have something soon brother!! Much love

Verlena S. Walker February 25, 2015 at 8:35 PM Such a lucky woman should not ignore you Jared. I have enjoyed this poem! Verlena

Jan Allison September 11, 2014 at 9:57 AM stunning write Jared i have yet to try this form I love the repeated lines and the thought of her being like a mango smoothie mmm - great write:-) Hugs Jan xx

Vassilis Comporozos September 11, 2014 at 9:26 AM Nice play with rhymes