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Fireworks On Tv

Saw the fireworks on TV Exploding o'er the city; The river and the bridges Made the scene look extra-pretty. Yet it was not at all the same As watching it outside, When every boom that thunders Makes the crowd electrified. The television played some songs With patriotic flair, Renditions so pathetic It was hard for us to bear. I guess I can't complain too much - At least I saw the show, But seeing it in person Is the better way to go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/8/2014 2:41:00 PM
Very beautiful, but I agree with you. I too had to watch it on TV. Thanks for sharing. ... Lucilla
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Date: 7/7/2014 2:57:00 PM
The grand finale here at home sounded like holy hell breaking loose. It was AWESOME. :)
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Date: 7/7/2014 4:55:00 AM
Wonderful. so glad you enjoyed it, I did too with your words. well done best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 7/6/2014 3:22:00 PM
- Nice to see it on TV too - nice and warm in your own living room :)) - Enjoy reading, well done, as always Ilene! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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