Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Fireworks Beauty

love's fireworks beauty
                                   ignites from hearts' affection 
                                        intense light of love 

                                          as corals in sea 
                                   scenic beauty in eyes' sky
                                        Xanadu's stars smile 


                         

                               Date when judged: 13th June 2016

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Lynn Marie August 14, 2016 at 3:13 AM A gorgeous Haiku..so inspiring is the beautiful imagery of "love bursting with colour for all the world to share". A favourite...a joy to read :-) blessings, lynn Bl Devnath August 14, 2016 at 10:26 AM Thanks for your beautiful comment and blessings and also for adding this poem in your favorite list, my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Kelly Deschler June 6, 2016 at 7:26 PM Love and passion can be explosive sometimes when the chemistry is just right... A beautiful poem, BL. I really like the imagery in this one! Bl Devnath June 7, 2016 at 10:03 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your most beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

CayCay Godwin June 6, 2016 at 12:23 PM Just lovely, BL - a joy to spend time with your poem ... CayCay Bl Devnath June 7, 2016 at 10:04 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your excellent uplifting comment comment. Loved always, bl

Sandra Haight June 5, 2016 at 11:07 AM Beautifully written Haikus, BL, with the 'fireworks' imagery of love bursting forth. Best wishes for the contest. Bl Devnath June 5, 2016 at 11:11 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful uplifting comment. Loved always, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis June 3, 2016 at 7:24 AM Delightful pair of Haiku my dear friend, BLD! Bl Devnath June 3, 2016 at 10:30 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful uplifting comment. Loved always, bl

Lenny Gazbowski June 3, 2016 at 7:18 AM A beautiful pair Bl :-) Bl Devnath June 3, 2016 at 10:30 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful uplifting comment. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus June 2, 2016 at 4:10 PM When love's sparks fly, fireworks are to be expected, my friend! 'Tis a worthy entry for this contest. good luck. ~ Regards // paul Bl Devnath June 3, 2016 at 10:24 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for wishing me good luck. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2016 at 12:54 PM - Bl, a beautiful description in this haiku by love fireworks (7) - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath June 2, 2016 at 1:08 PM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful uplifting comment with wishes. Loved always, bl