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Hutinashro
Created by Connor Lotts, Each line has eight syllables. Iambic tetrameter is optional. Divide the poem into three stanzas, 12 lines in the first two stanzas with an (Aabccbddbeeb) rhyme scheme.  The first two stanzas share the first line. The last stanza is three lines with an aba rhyme scheme.

A new year is approaching fast, this one will be over at last. We crave to socialize, that's plain, and yet we shouldn't be too smug, covid is still a superbug. This virus continues to drain our resources with tasking trials, for older folks and juveniles. Yet, wearing masks is not in vain, they're both effective and low-cost, used once, then conveniently tossed, although often worn with disdain. A new year is approaching fast, think today, don't dwell on the past. Soon loved ones will gather again, and we'll finally get that hug that's far better than any drug. And breaking free of covid's chain, we'll unmask the beauty of smiles and resume our lifestyles. Go out to dine or board a plane, reclaim those precious moments lost. Celebrate life, despite the cost, and put aside our tears and pain. Let's be hopeful and less downcast it's time for fireworks and champagne, the human spirit's unsurpassed. (Hutinashro) 12/15/2021

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Date: 12/15/2021 11:12:00 AM
Hello Emile, yes the virus is still here and i am hoping that the New Year will end the virus. Something in the air has to be strong to rid the virus. Merry Christmas Emile. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/19/2021 3:35:00 PM
Hello Emile, Merry Christmas. Emile my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/15/2021 12:41:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene, have a Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/15/2021 8:47:00 AM
I really like this format and this theme, which you have expressed magnificently! Let's break out the fireworks and champagne, because you are absolutely right, "the human spirit's unsurpassed." Love it, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/15/2021 9:55:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, that's the spirit, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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