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Fireworks

Color bursts upon a black night sky; dancing sparks escape. Reds, greens, gold and blue patterns aflame; crescendo above the birds. I watch, sky’s palette; alive with resonating bliss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/22/2017 9:05:00 AM
Hello ML, A wondrously beautiful and very exciting Sijo. The imagery is palpable for sure!! (I must do one of these Sijo poems in the future. It's on my To-Do List!!) A FAVE TOO!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/22/2017 10:36:00 AM
I think your's would be great, Gary; you've got some wonderful work on this site. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 7/21/2017 6:00:00 PM
wonderful imagery ML I have rarely written this form and you have done a beautiful job:-) hugs jan xx
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/21/2017 9:23:00 PM
Wow, thanks so much, Jan; I do appreciate the comment.
Date: 7/21/2017 3:17:00 PM
A marvelous painting with colorful words so fine! Excellent my dear friend, M.L.Kiser!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/21/2017 3:20:00 PM
Many thanks, again.

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