M. L. Kiser Poet Sijo

Fireworks

Color bursts upon a black night sky; dancing sparks escape.

Reds, greens, gold and blue patterns aflame; crescendo above the birds.

I watch, sky’s palette; alive with resonating bliss.

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Gary Bateman July 22, 2017 at 9:05 AM Hello ML, A wondrously beautiful and very exciting Sijo. The imagery is palpable for sure!! (I must do one of these Sijo poems in the future. It's on my To-Do List!!) A FAVE TOO!! Cheers and Best, Gary M. L. Kiser July 22, 2017 at 10:36 AM I think your's would be great, Gary; you've got some wonderful work on this site. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Jan Allison July 21, 2017 at 6:00 PM wonderful imagery ML I have rarely written this form and you have done a beautiful job:-) hugs jan xx M. L. Kiser July 21, 2017 at 9:23 PM Wow, thanks so much, Jan; I do appreciate the comment.

Demetrios Trifiatis July 21, 2017 at 3:17 PM A marvelous painting with colorful words so fine! Excellent my dear friend, M.L.Kiser! M. L. Kiser July 21, 2017 at 3:20 PM Many thanks, again.