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Fireworks

I see the lights The colorful explosions The sparks flying Like angry dragons All are organized Like prepared dominos All when you light the spark They fall into rainbows The cracking The crashing The colors And Flashing How wonderful it is In an explosive fashion And when the world celebrates at night Firworks will be there to provide the light ~Brittany Amsden~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/3/2010 1:55:00 PM
A cool write Brittany.. perfect for the holiday... now there is a Haiku contest posted for fireworks so if u can write a Haiku which is a 5/7/5 syllable count for your words... u can enter it .. cause this one is awesome but does not fit the form required on the contest page.. go check it out.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. on vacation..
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:51:00 AM
This is really excellent. I like the flow of the words and the images in the poem. I can see the fireworks lighting up the sky already. Welcome to poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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