David Mohn Poet Lanterne

Fireworks

                   one
                careless
               utterance
              manifesting 
                  boom

            18 June 2025
    LIGHT UP THE LANTERNE
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Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2025 at 10:57 AM Oh finally , I see some else that did fireworks. But you went metaphorical. Cool

Jan Allison June 18, 2025 at 3:59 PM It's so lovely to see you on soup David, your poem made me think of trumpty dumpty opening his mouth too often! hugs Jan xx