Firestorm Fusion

Whirling irate firework spectacle
                Pings stillness with rust erode array
        Afflicted heart thrown debri rain affectional
   Rapidly spun unkempt sparks spill their firey foray
 

                  Jettisoned from adjacent universe
              Excited flames offer heat unfathomed
         Rage innate kills cold in hungry encompass
   Newly secured domain set alight is purely dazzled


                Supernova exploding sends elements
          Strikes my stagnant galaxy in rays of gamma
      Studded with hundred year tenure true limerence 
  Furnace insistance fuels hot hum of echoed enamour


                 Amber damp larva gradual arousal 
         Resistance drips ice melt silent submission
    Logic tarnished in star's splendourous encounter
Ignited forever by harshness of flared flame inquisition 


                 Structure remodelled, harmonious
            Black hole remaps unique secret binary
  Inhibit's last rites scribed by stellar bond solacious
Scars lasered invisible by nova who renamed me Libby




                   
                     10th November 2020 

                      Written for Contest : 
         There Is A Star With My Name On It
                     Sponsor : Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/14/2020 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations for your great win :)
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Date: 11/13/2020 7:54:00 AM
Such a beautiful structured poem deserves an accolade, congrats dear poet .
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Date: 11/13/2020 5:22:00 AM
Congrats Sigrid on your podium win with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 11/12/2020 7:02:00 PM
Sigrid, I am swept up in the firestorm fusion of passion and excitement. Brilliant imagery of a fervent new love! I love the stellar shine of your final line. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/12/2020 7:09:00 PM
Thank you for a sensational nice comment, Susan.!
Date: 11/12/2020 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Sigrid, on your win for this brilliant write!!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/12/2020 10:20:00 PM
Thank you for your support, dear Newton.
Date: 11/12/2020 11:58:00 AM
Wow Libby, how did I miss this one, brilliant depth, the cosmos, and adjacent universe, brought together with spectacular imagery, hidden binary systems so many out there, the shape of stanzas echo the Spreading cosmos, and most importantly I feel real happiness in a budding relationship, you deserve so much, great win as well cheers David
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/12/2020 10:21:00 PM
Ta, darling David. It's so rewarding each time to hear from you.
Date: 11/12/2020 8:51:00 AM
Interesting take on the contest Sigrid.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/12/2020 10:19:00 PM
Cheers, thank you so much for hosting it, Silent One. Star poems, so much scope (again)!!
Date: 11/10/2020 3:08:00 PM
Hey Libby I mean Siggy, Kaboom! Thoroughly enjoyed this one.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/10/2020 3:22:00 PM
Cheers, Beldon! Appreciate your feedback. Yes, crazy, I have never done anything like this before...... asked new man to name me. In one minute after asking he named Libby. I find it perfect!
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