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Firestorm Fusion

Whirling irate firework spectacle Pings stillness with rust erode array Afflicted heart thrown debri rain affectional Rapidly spun unkempt sparks spill their firey foray Jettisoned from adjacent universe Excited flames offer heat unfathomed Rage innate kills cold in hungry encompass Newly secured domain set alight is purely dazzled Supernova exploding sends elements Strikes my stagnant galaxy in rays of gamma Studded with hundred year tenure true limerence Furnace insistance fuels hot hum of echoed enamour Amber damp larva gradual arousal Resistance drips ice melt silent submission Logic tarnished in star's splendourous encounter Ignited forever by harshness of flared flame inquisition Structure remodelled, harmonious Black hole remaps unique secret binary Inhibit's last rites scribed by stellar bond solacious Scars lasered invisible by nova who renamed me Libby 10th November 2020 Written for Contest : There Is A Star With My Name On It Sponsor : Silent One

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Heidi Sands

Date: 11/14/2020 6:03:00 PM

Congratulations for your great win :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/13/2020 7:54:00 AM

Such a beautiful structured poem deserves an accolade, congrats dear poet .

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2020 5:22:00 AM

Congrats Sigrid on your podium win with this wonderful poem.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/12/2020 7:02:00 PM

Sigrid, I am swept up in the firestorm fusion of passion and excitement. Brilliant imagery of a fervent new love! I love the stellar shine of your final line. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/12/2020 7:09:00 PM

Thank you for a sensational nice comment, Susan.!

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 11/12/2020 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations, Sigrid, on your win for this brilliant write!!

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/12/2020 10:20:00 PM

Thank you for your support, dear Newton.

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/12/2020 11:58:00 AM

Wow Libby, how did I miss this one, brilliant depth, the cosmos, and adjacent universe, brought together with spectacular imagery, hidden binary systems so many out there, the shape of stanzas echo the Spreading cosmos, and most importantly I feel real happiness in a budding relationship, you deserve so much, great win as well cheers David

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/12/2020 10:21:00 PM

Ta, darling David. It's so rewarding each time to hear from you.

Silent One

Date: 11/12/2020 8:51:00 AM

Interesting take on the contest Sigrid.. Congratulations on your placement..

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/12/2020 10:19:00 PM

Cheers, thank you so much for hosting it, Silent One. Star poems, so much scope (again)!!

Belden Raiser

Date: 11/10/2020 3:08:00 PM

Hey Libby I mean Siggy, Kaboom! Thoroughly enjoyed this one.

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 11/10/2020 3:22:00 PM

Cheers, Beldon! Appreciate your feedback. Yes, crazy, I have never done anything like this before...... asked new man to name me. In one minute after asking he named Libby. I find it perfect!