Firelight

Everything follows relativity 
Good to evil, chaos to symmetry 

Thus we must go up and down 
Riding cycles round and round 
No lines of tangent; we lounge in our lair 
Sin's too rampant and we couldn't care 

The brightest flames grow quickest yet we dwell in pilot light
Long gone are the days we raged against that night 
Does anyone still desire romance? Can all of us live without fire? 
Why not feel its burning presence and build yourself an empire? 

We need to break these cycles soon 
They crush dreams with each turn 
Don't you want to embrace our doom? 
Set your flame to make the world burn

All we have to do is ride each other's asses 
Remove those rose glasses and address the masses
See the whole world, and wonder what to do 
Live each moment powerfully and true 

or 

Keep resting when you aren't tired 
And saying go without engine fired 
Forget those moments you felt complete 
Keep fearing every small defeat 

It's impossible to do alone. I've learned it well 
Actions are so hard to do with no one to tell 

The next cycle spins and there's far less wins 
Costs and losses fed by those spreading sins 
I want to wholly change for the better 
But without witness, I am no bar-setter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/7/2011 12:53:00 PM
Quite creative and interesting write on firefight, i appreciate the last line of your poem, Chance
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