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Fireflies Twinkle

In flight, fireflies enchant As bright colors they grant The moon, in hues of gold In tune with tides to hold A star will wink in time And spar in skies sublime A glance at skies above, A dance to twinkle love 6-6-2020

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Date: 6/28/2020 2:30:00 PM
awww, so this is the contest form. Gotta try it!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/28/2020 3:52:00 PM
Yes, this is the Essence Andrea, give it a go
Date: 6/15/2020 11:01:00 AM
How beautifully you have written this Joseph - you describe them so vividly! Blessings Joseph, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/11/2020 9:19:00 AM
A lovely dance of words...
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Date: 6/9/2020 12:31:00 PM
The beauty of simplicity in poetry!! Well done, Joseph. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/7/2020 10:44:00 PM
Such beautiful moments to behold. When fireflies or as some say- lightning bugs grace the night. I love watching them. Thank you for reminding me of these moments, the magic. :) Brandy
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Date: 6/7/2020 4:07:00 PM
as victor says, and I agree, lovely in its simplicity. How I miss the Iowa fireflies I saw in my youth!
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Date: 6/6/2020 10:31:00 PM
A fabulous musical poem. Well done!
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Date: 6/6/2020 4:42:00 PM
Loved the tone and flow--beautifully done, Joseph.
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Date: 6/6/2020 3:49:00 PM
what charming imagery in you rhyme Joseph and I love the inner rhyme too, a joy to read:-) hugs Jan xx
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