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Fireflies Light Up the Night

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fireflies glowing crib threads through count one by one ardent humid night 5/13/2018

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/15/2018 2:07:00 PM

most picturesque! Very good!

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/3/2018 9:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2018 4:58:00 PM

Nice description!! Congrats , Eve. I do love that insect and have missed it since I came to Utah so long ago.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 9:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the summer haiku contest! Love the imagery.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/2/2018 8:59:00 AM

Congratulations, my friend, on your top of the charts win! Wonderful haiku! Hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 7:21:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/2/2018 6:32:00 AM

Congrats on your glowing haiku!

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/2/2018 6:31:00 AM

An ardent night for sure, a winner in my book! Congratulations Eve. Mick

Paul Callus

Date: 5/16/2018 1:21:00 PM

The threads you mention can also be attributed to the thread connecting fireflies-glowing-ardent. A delightful offering, Eve. Hugs // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/14/2018 7:32:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Eve. I love to see the fireflies :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/14/2018 1:47:00 AM

Lovely image Eve, have only seen fireflies once, I was fascinated. Tom. Good luck.

Robertina B.

Date: 5/14/2018 12:37:00 AM

A lovely haiku, Eve.. Wonderful imagery and words.. You penned it perfectly!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/13/2018 9:39:00 PM

Breathtaking imagery, Eve. A beautiful haiku of a mid summer's evening.. Enjoyed! Warmest wishes ~Susan

J. Michael Sutherland

Date: 5/13/2018 8:42:00 PM

I have never really been a huge fan of haiku, but this one was very beautiful. For a three line piece of poetry, you got a lot of imagery across in your language. I especially like your use of the word "ardent" at the end. Reminds me of summer in a simple, beautiful way!

Eve Roper
Date: 5/13/2018 8:55:00 PM

Awe, thank you Jesse..