Fireflies In a Jar

WE'D STAY OUT AFTER DARK.
CATCHING FIREFLIES IN A JAR.
THE MOON SHONE  ON OUR FACES 
AS WE STARED UP AT THE STARS.
WE'D RIDE THAT RUSTY SWINGSET
SAIL HIGH INTO THE AIR.
BET WHO COULD SWING THE HIGHEST.
WARM BREEZES THROUGH OUR HAIR..
WHEN YOU AND I GOT OLDER
WE'D DRIVE DOWN TO THE PARK
SIT SIDE BY SIDE  IN THE,SUMMER GRASS
AND YOU'D  KISS ME IN THE DARK.
WE'D STAY AND TALK FOR HOURS
ABOUT WHO WE WANT TO BE.
YOU SAID YOU COULD NEVER BE TIED DOWN
YOU NEEDED TO BE FREE.
YOU DREAMED OF TRAVELING AROUND THE WORLD.
TO LANDS BOTH NEAR AND FAR.
NOTHING WOULD EVER HOLD YOU  BACK. 
LIKE FIREFLIES IN A JAR.
THAT SUMMER ENDED QUICKLY 
AND  YOUR FAMILY MOVED AWAY.
MY FRAGILE HEART WAS BROKEN
I MISSED YOU EVERY DAY. 
BUT THE YEARS KEPT MARCHING FORWARD
 AND THE PAIN BEGAN TO FADE.
I GREW UP AND GOT MARRIED
A  SIMPLE  LIFE I 'VE MADE.
BUT EVERY NOW AND THEN
  I'LL SIT IN THE SUMMER GRASS
AND MY MIND BEGINS TO WONDER 
ABOUT THE BOY THAT HAUNTS MY PAST.
I WONDER IF HE'S HAPPY.
I WONDER IF HE'S FREE.
I WONDER IF HE LOOKS UP AT THE STARS AND
EVER THINKS OF ME.
 AND THOUGH THOSE DAYS WERE LONG AGO
THE PAST IS NEVER FAR.
THOSE MOMENTS STILL SHINE BRIGHTLY
LIKE FIREFLIES IN A JAR.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/19/2017 2:21:00 PM
What a truly wonderful poem Laurie. The same thoughts happen to me more and more often. Great job.
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Laurie Mahoney
Date: 12/20/2017 7:35:00 AM
I actually had this made into a song.. if you want send me your email and ill send it to you. Its also on iTunes. Just search for the title.
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Laurie Mahoney
Date: 12/19/2017 9:17:00 PM
Well thank you sir!! ??
Date: 11/17/2017 12:53:00 PM
It is so sad that ppl who were so important seem to fade away! This piece is so full of heart! Bravo!
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Date: 11/17/2017 1:25:00 PM
Yes but the real meaning of the poem is about freedom. If u trap a firefly in a jar it will die. It needs to be free. It's nice to keep for a few moments then u have to let it go. Same this with boy. She had to let him be free to live.
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