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 02/09/25

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Contest by Brian Strand

I fly in sky of fireflies when crescent pretty descent Moon is about to rise. Sparkling glistening glow warms : Intermittent magnificent warm glow bringing calm charms . That occurs while in dream. but at dawn break as I awake to face facts, I scream. Real life is a challenge Path is rough. Steps are tough Too difficult to manage. I fly in sky of fireflies being happy while sleepy, awaking watching lies. Sky of fireflies flashing ambition so bright at night. Day break bringing no expectation.

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Date: 2/9/2025 8:31:00 AM
You've captured the magic of fireflies in your poem. I enjoy the flow of this poem.
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