Notes About The Poem
02/09/25
Just Feb. posted poem
Contest by Brian Strand
Fireflies Flying on Sky
I fly in sky of fireflies
when crescent
pretty descent
Moon is about to rise.
Sparkling glistening glow warms :
Intermittent
magnificent
warm glow bringing calm charms .
That occurs while in dream.
but at dawn break
as I awake
to face facts, I scream.
Real life is a challenge
Path is rough.
Steps are tough
Too difficult to manage.
I fly in sky of fireflies
being happy
while sleepy,
awaking watching lies.
Sky of fireflies flashing ambition
so bright
at night.
Day break bringing no expectation.
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