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Fireflies Flickering

fireflies flickering

by the lake in the gloaming . . .

delight lights her eyes

Aug. 14, 2018 for Tania Kitchin's Water Themed Haiku Poem Poetry Contest

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2018

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August 18, 2018 at 10:31 AM

loved this

August 15, 2018 at 4:48 PM

This is beautiful.

August 15, 2018 at 2:37 PM

I love that word gloaming Andrea. And seeing those fireflies twinkling. Beautifully done.

August 15, 2018 at 11:58 AM

Wonderful imagery! Should be at top!

Andrea Dietrich

August 15, 2018 at 3:08 PM

thanks, it's not even at the bottom

August 15, 2018 at 7:10 AM

Great imagery in this haiku Andrea..GL in the contest

August 15, 2018 at 7:06 AM

Beautiful imagery..a win for sure.

August 14, 2018 at 10:43 PM

Oh, so exquisite, Andrea. Your beautiful haiku speaks volumes. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

August 14, 2018 at 10:29 PM

Ah! A very bright haiku:)

August 14, 2018 at 5:30 PM

gorgeous!!!!:-) hugs jan xx

August 14, 2018 at 5:09 PM

Beautifully crafted Andrea

August 14, 2018 at 4:55 PM

Like this Andrea, it is so visual. different from others i've read, for the contest...

August 14, 2018 at 4:38 PM

Very nice Andrea! I can see it and enjoyed this :)

Frederic Parker

August 14, 2018 at 3:46 PM

been there it was a very peaceful thing to see...you captured it perfectly

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