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Fireflies Flickering

fireflies flickering by the lake in the gloaming . . . delight lights her eyes Aug. 14, 2018 for Tania Kitchin's Water Themed Haiku Poem Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/18/2018 10:31:00 AM
loved this
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Date: 8/15/2018 4:48:00 PM
This is beautiful.
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Date: 8/15/2018 2:37:00 PM
I love that word gloaming Andrea. And seeing those fireflies twinkling. Beautifully done.
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Date: 8/15/2018 11:58:00 AM
Wonderful imagery! Should be at top!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/15/2018 3:08:00 PM
thanks, it's not even at the bottom
Date: 8/15/2018 7:10:00 AM
Great imagery in this haiku Andrea..GL in the contest
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Date: 8/15/2018 7:06:00 AM
Beautiful imagery..a win for sure.
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Date: 8/14/2018 10:43:00 PM
Oh, so exquisite, Andrea. Your beautiful haiku speaks volumes. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Date: 8/14/2018 10:29:00 PM
Ah! A very bright haiku:)
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Date: 8/14/2018 5:30:00 PM
gorgeous!!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2018 5:09:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Andrea
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:55:00 PM
Like this Andrea, it is so visual. different from others i've read, for the contest...
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:38:00 PM
Very nice Andrea! I can see it and enjoyed this :)
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Date: 8/14/2018 3:46:00 PM
been there it was a very peaceful thing to see...you captured it perfectly
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