Fireflies Dance

Drifting off to sleep- wrapped within strong, loving arms- fireflies dance

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Martins Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 7:00 AM
accurate observation. be blessed Bulinya Martins
Chappell Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 5:16 PM
what a excellent thought my friend thank you [duncan]
Knop Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 7:31 AM
What a lovely sight, Audrey! I srtill remember the daces of fireflies last year before I moved here!...All the best!....Love, Gert
Anish Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 3:46 PM
Short - and right to the point. Have a nice evening. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Neels Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 10:05 AM
A sweet write you got here Audrey. Love it, enjoy your weekend. Love, Wilma
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Wonderful monoku with good images to convey your thoughts, Audrey
Culverhouse Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 5:02 AM
enjoyed reading toay... I love fireflies!
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October 2, 2010 at 5:01 AM
sounds nice to me!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 11:20 PM
Sweet one, Audrey! Luv, Andrea
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