Fireflies

~}{~ fireflies dance on peaks of eternal light soft whispers sign ~}{~
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Darwish Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 7:12 AM
Marvellous poem. Thank you for sharing. Love, Khalid
Palmer Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 7:00 AM
nice write Tracie,
Wesley Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 8:25 AM
This speaks to me in a magical way as I used to sit on a hill with them all around my head dancing in the night sky. Lovely Tracie
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 5:10 PM
Wondervul haiku, Tracie! I love fireflies but don't see them much in Florida. Your poem is the next best thing. Love And Blessings, Rhonda
Long Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 3:59 PM
love fireflies.. Gonna miss catching them.. Time to catch the leaves instead.. Just as fun. Have a great day Cory
Merryman Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Beautiful haiku, Tracie! Love, Kim
Squyres Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 10:44 PM
Simply beautiful !!
Alvez Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 10:25 PM
Lovely haiku! Cynthia
Mongrut Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 10:08 PM
Tracie, We dance as fireflies in the night on peaks of eternal light we play as butterflies in the day as your new friend, I have come here to stay! :) Thank you for "Fireflies," a deep and beautiful creation! Carlos
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August 27, 2012 at 9:40 PM
Wow, for such a small poem this one sure packs a great punch! The meaning is astounding my friend! I love lightening bugs, they a beautiful to watch! This is a wonderful Haiku Tracie! I just love it, Great Work!!
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