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Fireflies

fireflies dot the landscape... blown by the wind fireflies glow in the dusk... silence lighted

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/7/2012 9:30:00 PM
Sara, this is very pretty.. i feel like playing connect the dots all of a sudden...lol...Kidding.. I'm a sucker when it's firefly season around here... hugs good night..pd
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Date: 6/7/2012 9:17:00 PM
Sara, these are really nice haiku from you, especially that first one!
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Date: 6/7/2012 2:02:00 PM
this string sets me on a glowing mood, sara... wow..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/7/2012 1:10:00 PM
This is a glorious write Sara! I really enjoyed the distinctness of the fireflies and their display in the sky! It almost seems as if time stops in the last Haiku! Terrific Work!!
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Date: 6/7/2012 10:46:00 AM
beautiful descriptions here, my friend. Thanks, Sara - enjoyed the contest : )
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Date: 6/7/2012 10:34:00 AM
Brilliant - Sara! - Well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/7/2012 9:57:00 AM
Wonderful imagery here Sara!
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Date: 6/7/2012 8:38:00 AM
Lovely!!
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Date: 6/7/2012 8:26:00 AM
I am glad i stopped in to read this the morning sara, love the mesage and i love fireflies. Hugs!! Carma
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