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Fireflies

fireflies
dot the landscape...
blown by the wind

fireflies
glow in the dusk...
silence lighted

naturehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

June 7, 2012 at 9:30 PM

Sara, this is very pretty.. i feel like playing connect the dots all of a sudden...lol...Kidding.. I'm a sucker when it's firefly season around here... hugs good night..pd

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2012 at 9:17 PM

Sara, these are really nice haiku from you, especially that first one!

Nette Onclaud

June 7, 2012 at 2:02 PM

this string sets me on a glowing mood, sara... wow..:) huggs!

Russell Sivey

June 7, 2012 at 1:10 PM

This is a glorious write Sara! I really enjoyed the distinctness of the fireflies and their display in the sky! It almost seems as if time stops in the last Haiku! Terrific Work!!