Fireflies

                       your hand in mine,
                tiny lights whisper promises
                  beneath ebony evening~
                     fireflies spill velvet ink

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Line Gauthier

June 13, 2025 at 4:23 PM

Lovely, JCB ~

Paula Goldsmith

May 29, 2025 at 11:24 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fireflies" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Andrea Dietrich

May 29, 2025 at 6:25 AM

I love this. I think fireflies are the most charming little insects. Congrats.

Ink Empress

May 29, 2025 at 2:43 AM

This is so beautiful and romantic, i see you always do well in my contests, perhaps it is the evocative nature of your word weaving plus how you paint imagery: while ensuring theres soul in your words, i felt this so very deeply and i must say your last line is the best here! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light

Paula Goldsmith

May 17, 2025 at 10:14 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fireflies" write. Few words with much said. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away............

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