Fireflies

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For Ink Empress' Micro Poem Poetry Contest 16 May 2025

your hand in mine, tiny lights whisper promises beneath ebony evening~ fireflies spill velvet ink

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/13/2025 4:23:00 PM

Lovely, JCB ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/29/2025 11:24:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fireflies" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:25:00 AM

I love this. I think fireflies are the most charming little insects. Congrats.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/29/2025 2:43:00 AM

This is so beautiful and romantic, i see you always do well in my contests, perhaps it is the evocative nature of your word weaving plus how you paint imagery: while ensuring theres soul in your words, i felt this so very deeply and i must say your last line is the best here! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/17/2025 10:14:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fireflies" write. Few words with much said. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away............