Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Verse

fireflies

                                     Carrying light as backpackers
 
                                   fireflies emit sparkles of crackers

                                and to attract mates,become trackers.


         
                                                    Place : 3rd

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Hilda Greenhough May 29, 2025 at 8:56 AM This is a splendid description of fireflies. I enjoyed them on the east coast of the U.S. There aren't any here in the desert. Patri Venkata Ramana May 30, 2025 at 4:52 AM Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my lines.

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2025 at 6:35 AM cute one on fireflies. Big congrats to you Patri Venkata Ramana May 30, 2025 at 4:51 AM Thank you so much for your compliments.

Ink Empress May 29, 2025 at 3:20 AM Youv given a thorough definition of fireflies! Very well described! Thank you for joining! Congratulations on your win, sending you light Patri Venkata Ramana May 30, 2025 at 4:51 AM Thanks a lot for your compliments.