fireflies

Carrying light as backpackers fireflies emit sparkles of crackers and to attract mates,become trackers. Place : 3rd

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/29/2025 8:56:00 AM

This is a splendid description of fireflies. I enjoyed them on the east coast of the U.S. There aren't any here in the desert.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/30/2025 4:52:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my lines.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:35:00 AM

cute one on fireflies. Big congrats to you

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/30/2025 4:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for your compliments.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/29/2025 3:20:00 AM

Youv given a thorough definition of fireflies! Very well described! Thank you for joining! Congratulations on your win, sending you light

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/30/2025 4:51:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your compliments.