Fireflies

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Placed Second in Micro Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by Ink Empress

Fireflies Like stars, fireflies yearn to shine and match their beauty, but kiss the ground awhile.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:32:00 AM

this is so charming. I like this a lot, and congratulations

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/29/2025 11:08:00 AM

Thanks again dear poetess for appreciating this write and your kind wishes. May your days be blessed.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/29/2025 3:15:00 AM

Ah what a gorgeous picture to go with your micro! Son beautiful and dreamy! I really loved the last line in this poem! Seamless and heartfelt! So descriptive. Pleasure reading. Thank you for joining. Sending you light. Congratulations on your win

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/29/2025 11:04:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating the write and for its placement in the contest sponsored by you. Wish you again a vey pleasant day filled with blessings.