fireflies

surfing through the midnight falls, 
engrossed in neon fireflies ~ 
a souvenir kissed by the moon...
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Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Love this one. Congrats, dear.
Liguori Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 3:43 AM
I truly love these words. Fantastic write, indeed.
Empress Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 3:01 AM
I love the dreamy nature of your word weaving, and how ethereal it is, your use of the line "kissed by the moon" stands out for me and it deeply resonates with me. Exquisite take that flows so very seamlessly! The descriptive manner youv painted imagery and delivered it is soft and heartfelt ! Thank you for sharing and post more on soup! Sending you light . Congratulations on your win.
Godwin Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 2:58 PM
You just sent me back many decades, to the Smokey mountains, a field of lush grass where here and there a mighty tree did reside, twilight, my cousins, running, laughing, jars, a freedom feel and fireflies. You used less words to bring all this to me, than I needed to share all your words brought. Don't cha love it when that happens? I feel I should thank you ... CayCay
Rolland Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 4:19 AM
so cute imagery, have a nice saturday
Onpaper Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 7:06 AM
surfing through the midnight falls, ooo surfing!!! Gorgeous imagary darlin.. a souvenir kissed by the moon... oooo how enchanting!!! Gorgeous piece!!
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