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fireflies

surfing through the midnight falls, engrossed in neon fireflies ~ a souvenir kissed by the moon...

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/22/2025 2:58:00 PM

You just sent me back many decades, to the Smokey mountains, a field of lush grass where here and there a mighty tree did reside, twilight, my cousins, running, laughing, jars, a freedom feel and fireflies. You used less words to bring all this to me, than I needed to share all your words brought. Don't cha love it when that happens? I feel I should thank you ... CayCay

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/17/2025 4:19:00 AM

so cute imagery, have a nice saturday

Tom Woody

Date: 5/14/2025 6:39:00 AM

Pretty verse. I remember how much you like fireflies

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 5/13/2025 7:06:00 AM

surfing through the midnight falls, ooo surfing!!! Gorgeous imagary darlin.. a souvenir kissed by the moon... oooo how enchanting!!! Gorgeous piece!!