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fireflies

surfing through the midnight falls, 
engrossed in neon fireflies ~ 
a souvenir kissed by the moon...

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:27:00 AM

Love this one. Congrats, dear.

Robert James Liguori

Date: 5/29/2025 3:43:00 AM

I truly love these words. Fantastic write, indeed.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/29/2025 3:01:00 AM

I love the dreamy nature of your word weaving, and how ethereal it is, your use of the line "kissed by the moon" stands out for me and it deeply resonates with me. Exquisite take that flows so very seamlessly! The descriptive manner youv painted imagery and delivered it is soft and heartfelt ! Thank you for sharing and post more on soup! Sending you light . Congratulations on your win.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/22/2025 2:58:00 PM

You just sent me back many decades, to the Smokey mountains, a field of lush grass where here and there a mighty tree did reside, twilight, my cousins, running, laughing, jars, a freedom feel and fireflies. You used less words to bring all this to me, than I needed to share all your words brought. Don't cha love it when that happens? I feel I should thank you ... CayCay

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/17/2025 4:19:00 AM

so cute imagery, have a nice saturday

Tom Woody

Date: 5/14/2025 6:39:00 AM

Pretty verse. I remember how much you like fireflies

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 5/13/2025 7:06:00 AM

surfing through the midnight falls, ooo surfing!!! Gorgeous imagary darlin.. a souvenir kissed by the moon... oooo how enchanting!!! Gorgeous piece!!

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