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Firecrackers

Fiery flashes fill the sky Into the air rise the rockets Reaching for the stars Everywhere you look are dazzling colors Crash,bang,boom go the firecrackers Remembering all those you help gave us our freedom All around people are celebrating Independence Day Come and celebrate with us Keep those flags flying high Everywhere you go you see fireworks filling the night sky then Rushing to the ground like raindrops gently falling So ends another wonderful Independence Day,with a bang

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/23/2015 9:44:00 AM
A big congratulations to you !! How fun!!
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:19:00 AM
"...Rushing to the ground like raindrops gently falling...", brought me back to the 4th! Such fun. Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/23/2015 8:35:00 AM
Well done, Karen! Love that line "crash, bang, boom". Congrats on your placement in my contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:46:00 AM
lovely acrostic - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:46:00 AM
Congrats on ur top place winning beauty Karen!
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this poem that honors though celebration, our freedom.
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:33:00 AM
Hi Karen, congratulations on your win. Awesome Acrostic. Love SKAT
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