Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

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Fireball

red-orange fireball
through silhouetted bare forest....
hoary grass 'pon hill 




Date: 12-29-2022
Contest: Ice, snow, or frost 
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
hoary-adj.-grayish white usually meaning frost or white hair of an aged person
The word orange can be pronounced with one or two syllables. I checked in several ways.

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Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2023 at 10:31 AM So lovely, Sara Sara Kendrick January 2, 2023 at 12:30 PM Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the compliment. Sara

Susan Ashley January 2, 2023 at 8:49 AM Dear Sara, even the fireball of the winter sun cannot thaw this cold scene, where I imagine one to be outside admiring this view of Nature with their frosty breaths of awe. Your amazing imagery brings me there. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Sara Kendrick January 2, 2023 at 12:32 PM Susan, Yes, in parts of the USA, I am sure people are suffering and thinking spring will never come. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues December 29, 2022 at 7:35 PM Interesting! A great visual! Sara Kendrick December 30, 2022 at 2:45 AM Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Sotto Poet December 29, 2022 at 8:58 AM Great haiku, Sara. Loved the imagery you conveyed here. Best wishes to you and yours. Sara Kendrick December 29, 2022 at 10:22 AM Thank you, Sotto. Your visits are uplifting. Sara

Vijay Pandit December 29, 2022 at 5:39 AM Great imagery, Sara. Best to you. Sara Kendrick December 29, 2022 at 8:30 AM Thank you, Vijay. Your visits are uplifting. Sara

Clifford Villalon December 29, 2022 at 5:04 AM Mesmerizing... Sara Kendrick December 29, 2022 at 5:13 AM Why, thank you. SK