Fire Wall

Someone's sneaking,
reading, peeking,
poking, prying, trying, seeking...
Seeing if your secret's leaking,
seeping through, the walls have weakened,
finding out the facts you're keeping
seeing through your thin disguise...

And someone's breaking
enter, taking,
entertaining, gaining, raking
in the money for the making,
staking out the doubt you're shaking
seeing through the You you're faking
knowing you're Just Living Lies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/3/2014 6:24:00 PM
fun read, loved it!
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Date: 2/2/2014 11:22:00 PM
if it was a bit longer I could have enjoyed more the time reading :P oricum mi-a placut.
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Date: 2/1/2014 12:48:00 PM
Tried to message you back but you've got mail turned off. Something's going on with the site; I've had the same thing happen as Skat reported, about stuff disappearing so I think it's a fluke. Turn your mail on otherwise I can't write back. See what you've done? Mass hysteria! lol
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Date: 2/1/2014 12:13:00 PM
Sophia join the club...
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Date: 2/1/2014 12:09:00 PM
It killed me that this was so good and I could not pick it apart. I was dying to! You, only you, could have written this. Can't believe I didn't catch it sooner! After 20 years, I knew you were the only one capable of this genius, butthole.
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/1/2014 12:50:00 PM
Give me hell; never stopped you before!
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Sophia Valentina
Date: 2/1/2014 12:29:00 PM
Kind of sad the cat's outta the bag...it was so much fun writing for you. You've been a great muse :). Loved Assault and Pepper...knew it was for me instantly. The title made me chuckle immediately!
Date: 2/1/2014 8:11:00 AM
A different one...
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Date: 1/31/2014 2:53:00 PM
What happens when you let someone in huh? Your word play is great. I love how this reads. Thanks for your comment on Wisdom, as you have alerted me to your talent. I'll be back, thanks again.
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Sophia Valentina
Date: 2/2/2014 3:56:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments. I'll be checking back soon!
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