Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Fire To Light

by Michael J Falotico


                                                exiled souls floating..
                                         drifting with heartless thoughts..
                                              doors of Hell not closed..

                                                raging wings upward..
                                            fingertips placed on firmly..
                                             bright lights shine on me..

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Dr.Ram Mehta April 9, 2011 at 9:10 AM I loved the imagery in the write, Michael

Kash Poet April 8, 2011 at 6:58 PM Intense write Michael,enjoyed--kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 8, 2011 at 4:21 PM Intensely spirit filled piece Michael.. inspirational expressions in this Senryu.. luv the imagery penned .. we lost power from the thunderstorms all day and torrential rains here and just booted back up from most of the day luv.. hope u are not drowning in rain like we are right now.. cannot wait for temps to rise ... so your words heat up my heart my White Knight of P.S. ... your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv.. happy weekend...

James Foulk April 8, 2011 at 2:47 PM a very creative Senryu, enjoyed reading it.