Joseph May Poet Triolet

Fire Opal Skies - Visual 2

Birds bespeckle  tangerine skies
 As sun meets sea  in waves of gold
  Upon the wind the birds now rise
 Birds bespeckle tangerine skies
 As summer frames the sun's demise
 On gentle breeze beauty  unfolds
 Birds bespeckle tangerine skies
 As sun meets sea  in waves of gold

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Kim Merryman June 13, 2015 at 8:57 PM Your words paint a lovely picture, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

David Mohn June 13, 2015 at 8:05 PM Back for congrats Joseph...a beauty to be sure!

Sandra Haight June 13, 2015 at 7:51 PM Lovely verbal image here, Joseph, with your interpretation of that visual! Congrats on your nice win. And thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats on my poem, 'The Country Road'. Sandra

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 6:28 PM JOSPEH, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:39 AM Dropping back with my congrats Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2015 at 12:58 AM Irregular meter kept it from getting higher, Joseph. This is just about as pretty as a triolet can get. Congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus May 29, 2015 at 6:11 AM Your captivating imagery serves you well, Joseph! Love the tangerine skies! gl in the contest. // paul

David Mohn May 27, 2015 at 8:28 PM This is wonderful Joseph...sure to shine in Andrea's eyes

Skat A May 24, 2015 at 4:12 PM That's a stunning triolet. Forever **SKAT**

Jan Allison May 24, 2015 at 3:04 PM the imagery is simply delightful Joseph - good luck in the contest - I love the idea of tangerine skies - simply sublime:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx