Earl Schumacker Poet Rhyme

Fire - of Ancient Origins

Fire – Of Ancient Origins

Anthropological dawning’s
Cave walls with lit magic drawings 
Of firestorms                                         

Sacred mystical deity
Cavemen prayed with fidelity
For firelights

Their children delighted and grew
History ignited the fuse
On fireworks


Created by: Earl Schumacker on 11/19/14  for - Fire, Earth, Wind, - Poetry Contest
(Theme is – Fire)

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Faye Gibson November 28, 2014 at 11:46 AM Wow! You came up with a great theme for this one. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2014 at 5:45 PM Cool, it is like the theme song for Big Bang theory. from caveman up to modern man!! Congrats for your win. Earl Schumacker November 28, 2014 at 6:17 PM Hi Andrea, Thank you so much for your encouragement. I'm glad you liked it. Big Bang is one of my favorite shows. Have a pleasant evening. Take care. Earl

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 26, 2014 at 7:40 PM I love your unique take on the theme! Congrats to you, Earl! Hugs, Rhonda Earl Schumacker November 26, 2014 at 9:02 PM Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much. Congratulations to you too. Your poem was one of the best I've read for this contest. I would have given you a 1. Have a great day and a Happy Thanksgiving. Earl

Nette Onclaud November 26, 2014 at 7:52 AM fine historical perspective on generational themes, earl...thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your great win! Earl Schumacker November 26, 2014 at 11:35 AM Hi Nette, Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. It was a lot of fun. Have a Happy Thanksgiving. Take care. Earl

Connie Marcum Wong November 26, 2014 at 1:09 AM Congratulations on your win with this amazing entry Earl. I really liked yours! Earl Schumacker November 26, 2014 at 11:43 AM Hi Connie, Thank you so much. Congratulations to you too for your great poem and win. Have a Happy Thanksgiving. Take care. Earl

Brenda Meier-Hans November 25, 2014 at 6:34 PM Nice to see a different take on this. Congratulations on your win Earl. Earl Schumacker November 25, 2014 at 8:52 PM Hi Brenda, Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Congratulations to you too. I enjoyed your interesting poem in this contest. Take care. Earl

Sandra Haight November 25, 2014 at 6:31 PM Hi Earl, I really like the images you used for your fire theme...the dawn of civilization...what a long way we've come. Very moving. Congratulations to you for your win! Sandra Earl Schumacker November 25, 2014 at 8:57 PM Hi Sandra, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Congratulations to you too. I enjoyed reading your excellent entry in this contest. Nice win. Nice job. Have a great evening. Earl

Maurice Yvonne November 25, 2014 at 4:17 PM This is so good Earl, I love yours. Congratulations on your fine win. Earl Schumacker November 25, 2014 at 5:28 PM Hi Maurice, I appreciate your comments. Thanks. Take it easy. Earl

Jan Allison November 25, 2014 at 3:06 PM Don't know how I missed commenting on this Earl - love the imagery - great write my friend - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison November 25, 2014 at 5:36 PM Those lovely comments mean more to me than my actual placement thank you Earl:-) Hugs jan xx Earl Schumacker November 25, 2014 at 5:32 PM Hi Jan, They must have just posted this contest win. I'm glad you liked this one. I enjoyed your wonderful creation. Congratulations on your higher placement in the contest but you should have placed higher. Good job. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl