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Fire Monkey

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Cunningly swinging
On the trees of life
Playing his pranks
Winding up the wife

Enjoying every challenge
Using his brain
Owning it. Bossing it
Playing the game

He's a Chinese Monkey 
- a little bit spunky
A little bit of attitude
A little bit of grit

Dashing, darting
With daring and drive
Top of the tree
And feeling alive

Dancing with spirit
Fire and wit
Not at all annoying
- well, maybe just a bit(!)

He's a Chinese Monkey 
- can get a bit funky
A little bit of attitude
A little bit of grit

Friendly when he wants to be
He'll pat you on the back
Can get a bit competitive
Never one to slack

Ants in his pants
Fire in his belly
Gregarious.  Free.
Can give it some welly

He's a Chinese Monkey 
- Full-speed junkie
A little bit of attitude
A little bit of grit

Nimble on his feet
Able with his hands
Confident and up-beat
Always with a plan

Charming little fella
Curious too
Has the metal and the dignity
To get himself through

He's a Chinese Monkey 
- can get a bit funky
A little bit of attitude
A little bit of grit

Little bit of attitude
Little bit of grit

Little bit of attitude
Little bit of grit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/14/2016 6:30:00 AM
David, Just found you through your contest. I love the playfulness and rhythm of your poetry. What fun you must have had composing this and what joy you give to others. Congrats!
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Date: 7/23/2016 7:02:00 PM
Hi David, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I loved the humour in the lines. This is a real feel good poem. Excellent. This is a definite seven.
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David Lindsay
Date: 7/24/2016 8:53:00 PM
Very kind, thanks :)
Date: 7/23/2016 5:46:00 PM
oh wow, how FuN to hear you reading this . I love when poets put their all into the reading and we can see how fond they are of what they wrote. I love this, DAvid. You read it fast too, which I really appreciate. This is not a poem to drag along. The ending was so cute how you faded out. FAVE
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David Lindsay
Date: 7/23/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thanks for this. Figured it was worth putting the audio up too - brings it to life somewhat :)
Date: 7/23/2016 1:22:00 PM
David, wonderful read and win...Hope to see you stop by my blog *Female Spirit* always and forever ~Linda~
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David Lindsay
Date: 7/23/2016 6:56:00 PM
Thanks for the placing :)
Date: 6/28/2016 6:54:00 PM
You can read this fast and get a laugh and you rap to the beat and feel the heat . Personally I hear drums with this one. Niiicccee.
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:07:00 PM
haha,,, enjoyed...---skat
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Date: 5/22/2016 9:51:00 AM
nicely done david, i love the content and pace of your read anthony
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