fire island night

his swimmer's beauty lifeguard oceanic dance fire island night

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/21/2024 8:34:00 PM

VERY intriguing write, Regina. Whoa and Wow! :) Gershon

Regina Elliott
Date: 11/22/2024 3:18:00 AM

This old poet's recollections of a long ago youth. How we become young again in the beauty of poetry. Shabbat Shalom, good friend. :))))

Charles Messina

Date: 11/20/2024 10:00:00 AM

If only that fire island had a fountain of youth on it (lol) Nicely done, Gina. Happy Birthday as well. Hugs Charlie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2024 4:30:00 AM

Intriguing work. It left me wondering. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Regina Elliott
Date: 11/18/2024 4:54:00 PM

Hi Sara, an elderly poet harkening back to the carefree summers of youth. Then, one day we wake up to the golden years of aging. Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my poem. I hope you have a mellow November evening. Blessings :)

Tom Woody

Date: 11/16/2024 5:30:00 AM

Intriguing. I'd love to be present for this event :)

Regina Elliott
Date: 11/16/2024 5:36:00 AM

Hi Tom, the long ago joys of youth. Thanks so much for stopping by this morning. I hope you and your family have a splendid weekend. Blessings!