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Fire in the snow

You were there when I needed you the most, just for you to disappear into the night like a vengeful ghost. The texts you sent broke my heart, cause deep down I never wanted us to part. My biggest Fear, was for you to disappear, and for you to pass from sight like fire in the snow. I used to glow brighter than the flame, but you were the oxygen to my fuel. yet you were so cruel. Our bond was unbreakable, but you shattered it. Like the words we shared meant nothing. Our friendship ended in a blink and you watched me sink and drown in your eternal swamp. I can forever wish for our friendship to recrudesce, but not many it would impress. So hopelessly I wait, for a bond as strong as ours to re appear As I cherish our friendship like an old, forgotten souvenir.

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Date: 6/20/2025 11:31:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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