Fire Complete

AVOID the trap For it will catch on fire Meaningful tap Like you’re a live wire STRUMMING to the beat Of a different one You’re on fire complete Like the rising sun HOPE what you have is to succeed Giving it all, all you need
Russell Sivey Entrant into ^Rick Parise's "FIRE" contest 4/14/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Horne Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 9:11 AM
a sure winner here, my friend
Sweetheart Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 11:03 PM
another energetic omposition Russell.. on fire theme.. luv the capitalized words to heighten meaning of poem luv.. luv strummiing to the beat of a different one .. the fire complete is poetic art luv.. good luck..
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace