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Fire Complete

AVOID the trap For it will catch on fire Meaningful tap Like you’re a live wire STRUMMING to the beat Of a different one You’re on fire complete Like the rising sun HOPE what you have is to succeed Giving it all, all you need
Russell Sivey Entrant into ^Rick Parise's "FIRE" contest 4/14/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/14/2012 9:11:00 AM
a sure winner here, my friend
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Date: 4/13/2012 11:03:00 PM
another energetic omposition Russell.. on fire theme.. luv the capitalized words to heighten meaning of poem luv.. luv strummiing to the beat of a different one .. the fire complete is poetic art luv.. good luck..
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